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Personal profile
Before
A hard-working, results-driven team player, passionate about delivering high-quality work in a fast-paced environment.
After
Registered nurse with 6 years in acute care. Led a ward team of 8 and cut medication errors by 22% over 12 months.
Duty bullet
Before
Responsible for managing the rota and helping the team.
After
Managed rotas for 8 staff across 3 wards, lifting shift coverage to 98%.